All Comments on 'Serving the Dark Lady Ch. 03'

Not my usual cup of tea but it is surprisingly good. It has a semi decent story, just kind of wish that it would be longer with less chapters. It may take longer to come out but I personally prefer it that way. Not telling you to change it though, it’s your story. All in all it’s pretty good but could be a lot better. By the way I like stories like boiled frog and women studies. And ignore that other comment, I think that it’s in the right categories.

@GoldenDager - Thanks! This particular story was kind of a bit on the sillier side and most of the written chapters for it ended up being kind of short since they're lighter on plot than other things I've written. All in all though I'm a pretty succinct writer, I get to the point and don't like padding things. Sometimes that comes out as me sort of rushing through a story, though, and I'm working on not doing that as much. Chapter 5 is already written it just needs to get approved.

@Anonymous re: Wrong Category. - I pretty clearly tagged this story with gay, futanari, femboy, and crossdressing, and chapter 1's description isn't exactly subtle, either. You're better off complaining to the moderators, than to me.