All Comments on 'Set Bonus Ch. 02'

Well written with an interesting and unique story line. You are off to a great start here and it looks like there are at least a few more chapters coming, one for each set. And then a few more because why have these armor sets if we don't get to see them in action?

There were a few minor typos but not enough to detract from readability.

Please keep writing and sharing.

I'm sure it will all be made clear but what good is a guard that can't send out a warning?