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meadowbaremeadowbareabout 2 years ago
7days worth...what a week

Loved your story.

Both women are honeys, Marks a lucky guy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But doesn't deliver the goods. Much to fast. Too lacking in details. Too lacking in foreplay. JUst BOOM, sex starts and then it's over.

Disappointing.

Three stars.

D66769D66769about 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback! This story was definitely more about the sex than the relationship, but I appreciate that not everyone is looking for that.

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