All Comments on 'Seven Days Ch. 06'

I am a rereader but what occurred to me if if Antonio said no…Nic would have killed him and still found a way in.

The way you have me hooked is insane. I’ve been straight reading this for hours. I have a test in the morning. You should write a book.

Victoria is hands down the most absolutely pathetic heroine I’ve ever read about in my entire life. Just…totally pathetic in every way…

Nic is such an asshole. Great writing.

Excellent work.

This should be an entire fucking novel! Its so perfect! Please make it a novel!

If I could give you a award for the best story, I would have given it to you cause this is literally a masterpiece

Victoria deserves the world.

this is one of my favorite chapters, it's so bittersweet!

This is such an emotional story! Definitely a fan!

I love this story so much but omfg Victoria is so irritating at times! She doesn't want to rely on men yet she jumps from one guy's house to another guy's house. Gosh, but i really do love this story!!

god damnd. Nic is such a pussy. he can earn tons of Money BUT he may never ever again meet such a wonderful Lady like Victoria. so different from all the bitches around nic who only want his dick and Money. I hope Jimmy or someone else give him a friendly kick in the butt so he gets his stuf together and sets priorities in life. 5 stars btw.

I couldn't help touching myself during this chapter

Do you realize you left that comment after chapter six of a ten chapter story? Does that mean you think it should end after the next chapter?

this story is about 3 chapters longer than it needed to be.

I just wanted to say that I love this chapter so much, especially when Victoria tells Nic she loves him. I just can never get over that scene

Wait! You have stories on amazon??? What are the titles??

I love this story and I read it over and over again. Thank you for giving a me little taste of heaven for when I'm stressed out!

Miss Victoria was wanting it just as much as Nick, she was just still very mad at him, but when you have chemistry, your body over rides your anger, then after the anger returns lol. To Soular, this would be my most other fave story, the other story was taken off here and published i purchased it on amazon and i would readily purchase this story if you decided to publish, tho i have re read many times, such an awesome read girl.

I agree. Nick is a pathetic excuse for a human being. I don't see how any woman--outside of a work of fiction--would stay with him. Sure he might be good for a weekend, or to fulfill some latent, hidden fantasy, but definitely NOT someone that a woman marries.

I don't understand the appeal... At all. Victoria started out good but wow, she's so dumb. How many times do you have to get shit on before you quit seeing these people at all and start fresh. Nic has only done two nice things for her this entire story that didn't end with him calling her a slutty gold digger. I could see her ending up with paul and or Antonio before Nic. I can't believe anybody would like a manipulating ass like him. He says "come with me" pulls her anywhere, gets in her pants immediately. Then Calls her a gold digging whore... Leaves. She cries. This repeats itself. That's all that happens in this story yet people are all like "I love Nic." WTF!

One of my favorite chapters to reread. So real and emotional<3

Nothing wrong with this chapter - it's perfect! You have gained an extra fan and I'm telling everyone I know about your work. You work is way better than some of the published stuff I have read - really criminal!

I am rereading this story and I have a problem with this scene. While i admire your writing and this relationship, this scene is triggering because victoria kept saying no, yet nic continue to go on despite victoria's protest. I am not staying you intentionally created that scene in this manner, but it was a little uncomfortable to read.

I know I'm a late reader, but for the life of me, I cannot determine which story I like better- "That Damn Dress" or "Seven Days".

I hope you keep writing

You should really think about getting your work published. This was a great read. I went through so many emotions reading this. I cried, and laughed. I can truly feel the connection that they have as I am reading. I love the story! You are a great writer and I look forward to reading more from you!

i so agree with the previous comment

I wish I was her..

Nic could get it EVERYDAY!

I was going to wait until I finished the series to comment, but I couldn't wait. Your an amazing writer.I love all the characters. I love how you included more Antonio. My mans gonna take my laptop away if I don't stop saying no he didn't. Lol. So I hope your going to write another series...just saying :)

Tone up the characters, they seem very one dimensional and immensely stereotypical. We get only fractured glimpses of their potential.

The interracial plot line is very shallow, this story could be in any section.

On the positive, writing style is immersive and the situational descriptions vivid.

Nic just pretends to be so macho, when is cuddly and loving

Nic, step up and out of your comfort zone. Man up an d tell her the truth-will you???

My girl has finally manned-up.

This story is SO good. And Nic is a dumb ass.

I love your story so much.

You wear me out Soular, i need to take a break, but not for long, the 2 lovers are soooooooo exciting, and as for Sonny, the dick, but at least he caused the hot couple to briefly unite.

Off to read the next chapter.

Wow. You've impress me time and time again. Please update ASAP

All I can say is …WOW. I’m thoroughly impressed by you at this point. This is not just “erotic” literature or strictly interracial it’s a romance in its purest form. You’ve really found a way to leave an impression and make people want more.

In others... My fingers n toes are not enough for me to count the number of times on me checking for your new updates everyday knowing well tht you'd told us when'll it be out. Someone do help me!

Soular, darling, I’m sure that what commenters 100-109 and many others, who must have no idea of the pressure they are putting on you, meant to actually say was that they are so appreciative of the time you take to write, they understand the HUGE undertaking it is to put just one, little chapter together and they understand you are doing it for FREE and that you have a JOB and a LIFE. They are, I’m sure, even as they were typing their comments, PMing to offer you money to hire a maid and even take over your job and cooking and laundry so that you can sit in front of the computer round the clock typing them stories! I’m sure they don’t really care more about your stories than they do about you, a real life human being! You’re a great writer, please don’t let us burn you out. We want many more stories for years and years to come. Thanks!!

I am truly loving this story! it is a great storyline that works quite well. Tough Nick is falling for Vicki and he doesn't even realize it. And Vicki needs him to "step up to the plate" if he is going to get serious about her. I like that she is working at being independent...but can she have her cake and eat it, too? LOL. Please give us another installment. It has been quite a while since the last one. I am really ADDICTED TO THIS STORY!

update it! I'M ADDICTED!

I understand it's the holidays and all, so I won't freak out on you just yet (lol). Love what I've read so far! I'll keep checking back daily. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

I've read chapters 1-6 a few times while waiting for chapter 7. I think I should stop doing that. It only makes me more anxious!

I hope it's up and available soon!! :-)

~Faith

Can you PLEASE update faster??? I think I'm a junkie on your stories. Ever since I started reading them, I've been hooked. It's never taken so long for you to update. I'm nearly in tears here! I hope everything is ok with you though. But PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update, I will send you cookies!

You're doing a great job update soon please

I thought I was the only crazy person checking for updates several times a day and going through withdrawal! Guess not! It's Tuesday but no Chapter 7 yet! Fingers crossed for Wednesday!

I went out of town for Christmas vacation and just knew when I got back I would have a new chapter to read. I'm not losing my sanity just yet, but I need an update now too!!

...losing my sanity. Is it bad that I've checked for updates every day in the morning before work, at night after work and at midnight? I mean, that has to be a sign of an unstable person right? There could be any number of reasons why it's not updated, but honestly at this point I don't care why. I just NEED it!!! I'm coming off as ungrateful and ridiculous, I KNOW! I've only ever felt like this with SecretFantasy69's stories and even she's not updating! I can't take it, I can't. God, I hope that everything is ok in your life, honestly I do Soular but please please update...I'm just hangin on by a thread here.

A good writer always keeps her word. Where's that chapter you promised you'd submit either thursday or friday? It's Monday today. Please update soon.

GOOD JOB.

You are an amazing and gifted writer! I've loved both of your stories so far and can't wait for chapter 7. I sense a pregnancy coming on since she was so recently sick and antibiotics can cause birth control to fail. But whatever journey these to take will be well worth the wait.

I NEED chapter 7 soular! I'm so anxious to see what happens! LOL!

Merry Christmas!

~Faith

so im sooo in love with this story and can not wait for an update!!

I've reread this entire story to many times to count. You are a brilliant author that should think about getting published because I would definitely buy your books. I think this is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Do you write on any other sites? I would really love to read more of your work.

I actually cried at the end of this one. Nic is so pigheaded. My only regret is that it ended so quickly.

Once I start reading your stories I can't stop... You make me want to be a better writer. Your characters are so real and have so much depth to them. I can't wait for the next chapters.

a match made in heaven...

or just in your imagination with the help of a pen and some paper, but it's the same thing..

I want to know is he going to divroce Amanda? I still love Nic and Vic, and he is not in love Amanda..I would love to see Nic and Vic married with children. As for her father, what a bumb...she got rid of HIS debt and he can just toss her like that?????? And her mother stood by and let him..that is just wrong on thier part..the least he could have done was let he stay until she got on her feet!!!! More Please!!!!

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Loving every moment of this story. Love the way you convey the emotions, and of course, the sex. On pins and needles, waiting patiently for chapter seven.

I've read a few good stories on this site but this is absolutely the best. It has everything! I'm so looking forward to reading the rest of it but I almost don't want it to end.... Congratulations on an excellent job! I'm dripping with anticipation....

THANKS FOR WRITING SUCH A COMPELLING STORY. I LOVE THAT VIC MAKES IT HARD FOR NIC , HE'S SO USE TO GETTING WHATEVER HE WANTS . SHE IS TEACHING HIM SOMETHINGS HE HAS TO FIGHT WITH HIS HEART TO GET SOME THINGS IN LIFE. I DO BELIEVE VIC IS WITH CHILD AND NIC WILL HAVE TO MAKE SOME DECISIONS ON WHAT IS MORE IMPORTANT TO HIM, CAN WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP.

It clearly states in the last chapter that she has no friends, which is why she goes to Antonio. GEEZ. Before you go rating something poorly, please read through it carefully. Fine, these are all just opinions, and in my opinion, those who rate this chapter low because the story is not being told how they want it to are stupid. Go write your own fuckin story if it bothers you so much. Notice though, that under author, it clearly says SOULAR!! Not some asshole, with too much time on their hands. To say that Victoria is not a woman of high moral to get mad at Nic, you're on a freakin erotic site. What does that say about you? "Good moral" peopl aren't suppose to read trash like this, right? Whatever! Anyways, onto Soular. I freakin love you and Tangled so much, like seriously. You guys' material give me great stuff to daydream about when I'm in boring lectures. Don't let the negativity stop you from doing what you do best, especially to those rating this low. The jerk who rated this a 0, green is not a good color on you my friend, because you are obviously envious.

I absolutely LOVE this series. I went out of the country for vacation and found an internet cafe' so that I could read Chapter 5. You have great imagination and force me to use my own.

Wonderful work...I am anxiously awaiting Chapter 7.

I wanted to leave you a comment and say thanks for all the support, but Im afraid it might get lost among all the wonderful feedback you've received =).

Thanks, congrats on a wonderful story, and keep up the good work! I know its hard.

I am so waiting for the next chapter. This is a very good story.

Once again.... you rock. You and Tangledinyou are most likely the best authors on this site. I'm always anxiously anticipating your next chapter.... and Damn Dress??? DAYUM!!!

I think you're missing the story. You shouldn't be judging based on you thinking a character isn't a moral-valuing one. It's not about Victoria being liked and made just for YOU. It's about character development, plot, grammar, etc.

YES VICTORIA IS NAVIE BUT SHE IS STRONG. SHE LIVE IN STRICT HOUSEHOLD. SHE BEEN WORK SINCE SHE WAS TEENAGER HELPING HER FAMILY THUR HARD TIME. SHE BELIEVE EVERYONE HAS GOOD SIDE AND DESEVED SECOND CHANCE. YEAH SHE WAS DUMD FOR GOING OUT WITH SONNY. HER MISTAKE. AS WE READ THIS STORY VICTORIA IS BECOMING STRONG AND SHE COMING OUT HER SHELL. YES SHE NEEDS A GOAL. LIKE GOING TO SCHOOL TO BECOME A CHEF. SO SHE CAN OPEN HER OWN CATERING BUSINESS.

NICOLAS NEED TO MAN UP AND OWN HIS FEELING FOR VICTORIA. IT IS HARD FOR HIM. USUALLY NICOLAS GETS WHAT HE WANTS. NICOLAS LEARNING THAT HE CANNOT TREAT EVERY WOMEN LIKE A BITCH OR A SLUT. JUST CAUSE HE IS MARRIED TO A BITCH...AMBER WHO HE NEED TO DIVORCE. THAT IS GOING TO BE SHIT AND HATE TO BE HIM AND VICTORIA.

I HAVE NO PROBLEMS WITH ANYONE HATING OR DISLIKING THIS STORY. FOR ME I LOVE IT!!!!! WHO WANT TO READ FIARY TALES ALL THE TIME. THEY ARE GOOD HELP BUILT CHARACTER.BUT WHEN YOU READ A STORY DON'T YOU WANT DRAMA INTRIGUE CONFLICIT CATFIGHTS AND MOST IMPORTANTLY HAPPY ENDING. THAT IS REASON WHY MOST POEPLE READ STORY FOR THE HAPPY ENDING.

YES WE ALL KNOW VICTORIA IS PREGNANT. PENICILLINS PNEUMONIA BITH CONTROL AND UNPROTECT SEX..mhmm can we say BABY!!!!!!!!

I eagerly await your next chapter. I love these charcters. For all those with a bad opinion I don't think what your sayin is true but it wouldn't be called and opinion if you didn't have a different view from everyone else. I personally know what these charcters are going through. Yes it may sound dumb to people who's never been in that situation but it's possible. Love is never perfect or easy. Emotions are hard to control and you fight against them but in the end you just do whatever it takes to feel loved :) thank soular you've created a classic love story for me!

Does she not have any friends? She can't go home, she won't go to Nic, so she goes to Antonio. I get that, but why would she go to Sonny's place? That's Nic's enemy and he's no better than Nic if we're comparing people and what they do. She wants Nic to tell her he loves her, but she's okay with him being married to Amber? She doesn't have a high moral standing ground to be all mad here. And again, does she have any friends? Going to an event with Sonny after everyone basically associates her with Nic as his girl? So she's okay with being basically a side piece to whomever can afford her? Victoria's action leave it so she has no moral standing in having Nic tell her he loves her and whatever respect she was going for. She's not carrying herself as a woman of respect.

I'm paying extortionate internet cafe prices to keep up to date with this story and it was oh so worth it!!!

Nic, you a real jerk but I like you especially if you do what I hope you do.

Soular, get this published!!!!!!!

Rewriting a scence is called a REWRITE not an OPINION. Yes,

everybody has the right to agree or to disagree about this

chapter. But the bickering takes away from the beauty of this story. Soular writes very deep and thoughtful characters. We might not understand or agree with the reason why Vicky went with Sonny. But, Soular knows how her story should be written because it's her story. A story that which we are DAMN LUCKY TO READ!!!!! So, please let's sit back and enjoy her GENIUS! !!!!!!

Australia is beautiful. You should visit sometime. That said, I don't see how I am incorrect. I said "most" of the critquers said that Vicky was naive and most did. I didn't touch on the ones who proposed completely different scenes. Now I will. So what? When I read published authors and find stuff I don't like in the novel, I go online and after giving fair warning of a "spoiler" I let it all out. I say what could have been changed, what could have happened to make the story more believable, and sorts. It's all a part of the review. The author probably goes online (if she even checks those sites) reads that, goes "Oh well, can't please everyone" and keeps writing. Someone mentioned that arguing with readers is completely immature and I completely agree. It doesn't solve anything. Again, OPINION is OPINION. Let them be!

I just would like to say man i love your story line it just has me sitting on the edge of my seat. I'm into it i really wish there was more, please make it soon! I love the way she stays up for herself and how she says i love you but still the dumb man can't say it back. Men can be so closed up when it comes to matters of the heart.

All right, time to add my two cents as well. I've been reading the comments for almost an hour now. Firstly, I do think everyone needs to calm down, but with that said, I agree with TangledinYou's comments. I am not an author myself, but to express to an author what you did or didn't like about the story is one thing. Nothing wrong with that, it's what Ebert gets paid for. But to suggest how the author should have changed their story after its already been posted or published is a little obnoxious. And to anon in Australia, love visiting there by the way, but you are incorrect. One reviewer did suggest a whole new scene for Victoria, that would not have even included Sonny. I'm sure if the author wanted it that way, she would have written it that way. But I'm assuming her bringing Sonny into the mix was intentional, and we will see what the results of that was in the upcoming chapters.

But now, on to you Soular. I stumbled across both of your stories yesterday morning, and I'm am officially done up til this point. Man, you are a fantastic writer! I've been on this site for years, even during the early dark ages, and every now and then you come across an author like yourself, whose work garnishes so much adoration and frenzy. Some authors on here know they have no talent, so they write something so shockingly awful, that it gets a lot of attention and hatred, which was their intention. But you are the opposite, being that your writing is extremely beautiful, so many want to thank you for it, and I am one of them. You now have me as a fan, for better or worse. But I will add one tiny suggestion. I think both, Damn Dress: A Love Story and Seven Days, could have been submitted in the Romance section. Both of your stories have amazing romance plots, even more so than IR. I, myself, read predominantly Romance, and both of your stories are better than most(I'm talking top 5) in that entire category. I'm sure there are people who read that category, who would love your work, but never think to look in this section. Although, all you really have to do is check the Feedback Portal section, to see that Seven Days has dominated in comments for every single chapter. That's where my own curiosity was born. But, I don't want any of your fans biting my head off for trying to steal you away from this IR category. But, just think about it for your next story. And, keep up the great, fantastic work that you have been doing.

Victoria is slowly but surely breaking Nic down!!! AND I LOVE IT!!! I hope Victoria remains strong and makes him own up to his feelings for her!! She is a stronger woman than she gives herself credit for and I hope she sticks to her guns & keeps making him respect her!!! Go Vicky!!! Sonny better keep his fucking hands to himself and Vicky needs to let Paul know that she doesn't feel comfortable around Sonny. Maybe it will take Nic reading thru Victoria's diary for him to realize just how much he truly does love her and can't live without her. I can't wait for them to get together for REAL and Nic needs to get a fucking divorce from that bitch Amber alreaedy!!

I was honestly rendered speechless at the end of this chapter. It actually made me cry (although I'm going to claim the girl card, since I've been going through an emotional time the last few days, but I digress), and it's extremely rare that a story here on Lit does that. Once again, you've manaed to captivate us with your words, and you've woven a plot, complete with intricate characters that we can cheer for, scream at, and everything in between. I'm definitely loving it, and I CAN'T WAIT to see what happens next. The only bit of constructive criticism I can offer is to proofread. There were a few areas in which I spotted errors(although I have a bit of an eagle eye for it, where most may not notice). Other than that, don't let the hideous comments of those who are jealous succeed in causing you to doubt yourself--there's no need for that! We just want you to continue this story!!!

I think the person that left a '0' on Soular's work is a troll, a competitor and resented Soular for getting more attention, more scores and more good comments than that person's work. Jealousy exists everywhere even in cyberworld. I think Soular work is still great. Maybe the storyline for this chapter wasn't that agreeable to everyone. For me I kinda find Vic's getting a little too hasty and even pushy to want to make Nic to admit he was in love with her. Just because she was doesn't make Nic too. Nic is very confuse at the moment. He has never had real love so this kind of feeling is very new to him. I for one don't like a pushy character and Vic on this chapter got on my nerve. But still it was a good read as Soular has written Vic to become a stronger person - no more a pushover. She tried to take matters in her own hand which, as I've mention becoming a little overbearing for my liking. Nevertheless Soular's writing (despite the plot) was engaging (apart from some very minor grammar mistakes).

Good work still Soular! Damn! I used to be able to get this paragraph but now I can't. Can someone tell me how to get paragraph again?

to defend both soular and tangled. They're not just fellow authors, people, they've become friends. If Kaia seemed a little harsh to some of you in her defense of soular, take that into account.

Constructive criticism is a good thing, but I think some of the criticisms of this chapter have gone too far, especially the one from the... individual who so callously called it garbage, and gave it a zero. I'm trying to temper my remarks so as not to pour fuel on the fire, especially since nearly all the comments have been wonderful.

Soular, you're great. Don't doubt it.

as a fan of your works also, I'm pretty surprised by your comments. I actually think that, as an author yourself, your stmts to the readers are a bit inappropriate. Why all the "WTFs" and condescending, sarcastic comments? So what if people have given dissenting opinions? I went back and re-read ALL the comments to see if there were any made so worthy of your scorn, and I jsut didn't see it. So what if someone said "ehh... the sonny scenario wasn't beliveable. What would have been more beliveable is if she went with Paul" yada yada... how is that telling the author to completely re-write the story? All of you (Tangled included) need to learn how to read and let read. No need for these snappy, almost angry comments back to the dissentors. It shows such a level of immaturity.... can't imagine how you all must have responded to your highschool and college courses where you had to have peer reviews of your work.

Sheesh!

Soular - amazing job garnering all of this feedback. wow! I also find Nic and Vic's relationship a bit.... unbelieveable?.... and they both are starting to get on my nerves. So I completely see, and can agree, with the dissentors. Yet and still, I'm riveted by this story and chk back for it daily.

DAMN! DAMN! DAMN! YOU CAN'T FIGHT LOVE. IT IS BIGGER THEN WHOLE WORLD. I AM ON VICTORIA SIDE IF YOU CAN'T HAVE IT ALL I DON'T WANT IT. I HOPE VICTORIA SLAP THE TASTE OUT OF SONNY MOUTH AND KICK HIM IN THE BALLS. THAT IS LOW AS MAN. NICOLAS YOU ARE GOING TO LOSE HER IF YOU DON'T MAKE THAT MOVE.

I have nothing to add other than: GREAT JOB! Like a lot of the other commenters, I really feel what the characters are going through.

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<b>Victoria</b>- Nic did her dirty, but who hasn't been hurt by someone they love? And the fact that she desperately wants him to admit the same to her, makes it even harder.

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<b>Nic</b>- I can feel how torn he is. He's worked hard to get where he is in life and to know he'd have to possibly walk away from it to be with the woman he loves is a hard pill to swallow. What exactly do you do in that situation? In his line of work, having people close to you can be dangerous because enemies will use them as targets. Is it better to throw caution to wind and try and be with Victoria anyway or is it better if he just lets her go? With the latter he at least knows she'd be a lot safer. And even more than that, admitting you love someone is expressing vulnerability - something Nic NEVER does. I dunno, it seems like he can't be with her yet can't live without her.

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Anyways... this story is beyond awesome. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Well firstly I agree with most everything Tangled said. This isn't an ideal world here and people are going to be stupid. That having been said please don't kill of Paul. He's a very cool guy. And that would just complicate things so much more. Also I think Nic needs to suffer. How many chances has he had now to say anything that would validate Victoria's feelings? I understand that as a character he is in some serious denial, and that's fine. But there are consequences for your choices and I think he should experience them. That's not to say that I want him to grovel, because that's not him. But some serious confessing a little pleading aren't too much to ask I think. And people should lay off of Antonio. Firstly, Nic pretty much threatened his life. And he had his mother to think of too.

Damn, let not someone have a different opinion from the rest! This is dedicated to all those yelling at the FEW (except for the person who didn't even read the previous chapters and gave it a 0) who are giving the author tips and critiques on what they think should happen, etc., etc. First off all, to these staunch, angry defenders, why don't all of you just calm the hell down! WTH! Just because someone doesn't agree with something doesn't mean that they suck, are stupid, hate the writing, can't write, blah freaking blah! I hate coming on this site and watching as some ridiculous jackass tears apart someone's valid review because they disagree with it. I don't give a damn if you've written a decent story or not, can or can't write, you are entitled to your opinion and anyone who freaking tells you otherwise is a braying jackass! So speak your mind, dammit! I read those critiques that gave the author lower than 100 and ooooooo, what they had to say was complete garbage of course (insert dripping sarcasm here!) Seriously, most just spoke of the naivety of Victoria's character, well guess what, THAT IS a DAMN OPINION! The counter argument to that is that she just believes in the goodness of mankind! Again, OPINION! Get it? Everyone has one! And the "How To Fall In Love In A Socially Acceptable Way" comment was totally and completely uncalled for. I mean seriously, don't kill the readers for following the story and having a goddamn opinion!

What else?

Oh yes, Soular: Sorry, I had to put that out there after reading a few comments that shocked me. Now, onto you. Look at how many comments you've garnered! Great writing! Keep up the good wook! I think you are one of the best IR writers on this site, BUT please do not get into this bullsh*t about setting straight those who gave their honest opinions. I've read great stories where the author received comments and scores similar to yours and simply thanked everyone for the feedback and kept writing. The one thing that most readers hate is a writer who can't take criticism. It makes the writer seem hella cocky and no one likes a cocky bastard. So take the good with the bad, and do what you think best. It's your story, darlin'. Write it. Stay calm and cool. Readers will love you for it.

This was really good chapter...sonnys an ass....Nic just needs to admit his feelings fire her... Listen to Halo by beyonce great song....The drama is building up pretty good...please dont let her get pregnant like sienna....shit plz everytime he go up in her raw I think about that....damn that would fuck everything up....Everything is falling into place...paul is sweet ...Nic is still my favorite ...great chapter

I absolutely love this series. The way you develop the characters and the way you write it is amazing. This last chapter makes me want to cry so bad. For me, it's more than just the sex. At the end when Nic is saying "I never said I didn't love you" is just so..... there's no word to describe it. I wanted to cry for him, he seemed like a broken little boy. I wanted to wrap my arms around him and take him for myself. And Victoria... oh Victoria is amazing. I love how she grew and changed and she is just the sweetest. I love your story so much.

Your story is so exciting! Thanks.

As I always comment, I love your writing style. In this chapter I felt angry, sad, and pissed off with Victoria. I also hated her for trusting Sonny, because I feel that she should have known better. These are the reasons I love your stories, the reader actually FEELS!! I hate reading a story where I have no feeling whatsoever...so bravo.

For all those whose want the story to be their way..nothing in life is guaranteed. As we live we do some pretty dump and thoughtless things as well as some beautiful and wonderful things. In the end however we all want the beautiful ending that we now wish for Nic and Vic.

Thanks Soular...Keep on writing!!

Girl, you are as always on point with your writings. I cannot believe some people wanting you to change things. Girl forget them and do what you do!!I really enjoyed reading all of DAMN DRESS and all of SEVEN DAYS...I can't wait for the next chapter.

is to elicit so much emotions in your readers. Check this site to see how many stories let alone chapters get 60, and rising comments! None of us is going to tell you where to take YOUR story period. I'd take the 'comments' about what you should or shouldn’t write with a pinch of salt and in a strange way as a compliment. I think of the times that on a bus, train, plane or in a cafe, library, park etc I find myself 'talking' internally, and I admit it sometimes aloud, to a book that has grabbed me deeply. Asking what are you doing?, why did that happen? is an indication that the reader is so swept up with the passion of a piece. So Kudos to all these 'passionate explosions' as long as we as readers realise that you're the driver and that back seat drivers don't get to dictate, speed direction etc no matter what we think. On your writing you are truly inspiring and I'm learning a lot from how you develop the detail, voice and texture of characters. You build the tension and create a myriad of turns in a truly engaging way. It takes people watching to a whole new level. thanks again. EG

I'm checking everyday, I can hardly wait for a new chapter. It's magnificent, well-written, rife with conflict, sex is off the chain. The kind of story everyone can love and obviously does. Don't worry about the haters and the people that for some reason want stories to reflect their lives, what idiots. If you want a story that reflects your life, write one stupid. Soular you got it going on, I can't wait for your first published work, I'll be buying it in a hurry. But meanwhile don't leave us hanging with Victoria and Nic. I didn't think you could do better than Damn Dress but this is spectacular, you got talent kid.

SOULAR....This chapter was amazing as always! It was awful how Nic continues to treat Victoria but I think after everything she has been through she will come out stronger than ever. I am an optimist so I am still holding out hope that there is a happy ending for Nic and Victoria. I love both these characters that you have created through your writing. I can actually picture the setting and the characters in my mind everytime I read a chapter. Don't let these awful comments that some people leave get to you. Keep doing your thing....you do it amazingly well.

I started reading this chapter, not having read any earlier, but the plot was instantly apparent. Nothing here either original or good. BS

...now normally I just get on here and tell you how awesome of a writer you are. But today I am feeling some kind of way about how these people were jumping on your story with there "suggestions". Write your own damn story if you feel that this one isn't fitting the picture in your mind. How do you get upset for Soular expressing the story she has in her mind? If you don't like it or you are upset about it, then don't read it! And then you are anonymous on top of that! Just keep your comments to yourself! So I'll stop ranting and say that your story was great as always and I hope we get the next chapter soon. I need my fix!

This story is just too incredible for words. Wow!

I don't think I can stand the wait until the next chapter!

Oh WOW!!! I hope Nic can find it in his heart to say those three little words to Victoria. I love that Vic found the courage to tell him her feelings. The ball is now in Nic's court. Also, Victoria needs to get as far away from that loser, Sonny. That situation is nothing but bad news. As sweet a Paul Marcone has been to her, Sonny-boy has no soul.

Soular, I am truly addicted to your stories. I am like so many other's here who look for daily updates. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your tremendous writing talent!!! Please don't take too long posting Chapter 7, I need to feed my addiction! ;-)

and I agree with TangledInYou! It really pisses me off that some has the nerve to tell an excellent writer as Soular to change something she's written! I think it's rude to tell a writer to change something because you don't agree! If you're dissatisfied then go write you own story..being strong isn't only about the ability to say no...sometimes that option isn't there! True strength is the ability to not back down and break..Victoria has been treated like shit by almost everyone and yet she doesn't break she keeps trying..if that isn't strength then i don't know what is!

I think Soular has given us many many many hints about her characters personality and backgrounds. I don't believe she did anything out of order..yes Nic is an asshole but then again why shouldn't he be? like TangledInYou said it's all he's known and a man like him or anyone else for that matter can't change overnight..as for Sonny so what if Victoria gave him the benefit of the doubt? In this world a lot of men are like him...every woman will meet a man like him at least once in life..some of us will get away unscathered others will not..like Soular wrote in this chapter Sonny is unreliable and sneaky...!

TangledInYou and Soular you're the greatest and thank you for making Literotica a place worth coming! Luce

it!! You're the reason why i keep coming back to Lit. You have a great gift..not many people could turn Nic and Victoria into something that is believable!

Don't listen to those who think you should or shouldn't have done this and that with Victoria...We all know love blinds and lust is a very powerful emotion!

Besides you're the author and you wouldn't write it if you didn't have a reason to do so! Once again thank you for taking your time to write.

Luce

Hi Soular. You really are one of my favorie author. Please don't make us wait too long for chapter 7. I always check out your stories site for updates.

You really are a gifted storyteller. :)

I'M ADDICTED TO YOUR STORIES. NIC AND VICKY ARE TRUE HEAD CASES. WHY CAN'T EITHER OF THEM EXCEPT THE MOMENT AND LET GO? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!