All Comments on 'Seven Days of Solitude'

I didn't get past the guy dying from toxic fumes from stale Wheaties and lizard shit. Story couldn't get any better after that. That's the funniest thing I've read in a while.

Don’t waste your time and read this. My eyes are still bleeding.

The intent of the story was to have us start to read it and then figure out the joke was on us, right? Even the fiction was weird. Some cuck stories I can read but this was waaaayyyy out there. Even skimming through quickly it was just a stupid repeat of the slut demeaning the hubby and all he can say is "paint the bathrooms"?

I agree with @26thNC and @Huedogg2's comments...This is so bad that gave me a headache...It would be passable if Edward died in Japan from a poised sushi, her dead mother's work...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

This story is plenty weird but not funny. Better luck next time. Writing successful comedy is extremely difficult.

This has nothing to do with "Love". Just another stupid guy and his selfish and very mean woman. After the kid is born, get DNA checked. Chances are very low that it's his. He can walk away without concern for her. Good luck with a sixty year old woman with a baby finding another man. She will be a very lonely single mother and a sad fatherless child who will resent her for the rest of her life. (Her being pregnant at 60 is silly anyway). terrible writing

Why would you write such nonsense? I really didn't like this one.

This is not at all erotic. Why don't you just give up and admit you are an utter failure.

and unsatisfying. Even ignoring the theme, the writing just wasn't good or consistant.

The story was already weird, but that pushed it into the realm of the absurd.

KB

don't have any idea of why he would keep a slut like should have kicked her to the curb years ago not keep the bitch if she needs other men then doesn't need you

you just can`t fix stupid no matter how hard you try

If it was meant to be erotic, you failed. If it was meant to be satire, you failed. If it was meant to be entertaining, you failed. If it was meant to be a commentary on the dearth of good stories...well, in that regard you succeeded.

I don’t know who let you use a computer but that individual should be sent to prison for allowing you to inflict this ridiculous excuse of a story on us. There are laws against cruel and unusual punishment and you broke them.

Do yourself, and the rest of us, a favour. Don’t. Write. Ever!

Put succinctly, you are horrible at writing and we are all made more stupid for having read your story. May God have mercy on our souls.

I like this story a lot. It is so over the top, so weird, so… Please tell what are you using, a smoke can’t be strong enough, to write like this. Five stars.

Ok. So I assume, based on the writing style, that this is meant to be a spoof of One Hundred Years of Solitude.

I won't comment on the execution of this project. But I will note that few of the readers here will ever have heard of that book or understand the parody.

The author writes with passion about people who offer no grace or depth. Sad

Then came the line about sperm living for years in a woman. Really? How about a few days unless they find an egg to impregnate and then they still get kicked out in 9 months or less. This was one of the oddest stories I've read here and NOT in a good way.

1 star

It’s lecturing with no point. Preaching with no subject. A lot of words about nothing. The best thing I can say about it.....it’s a good story .....to skip !

At 60 years of age, women don't have any eggs to ovulate with, you know that thing called menopause, sperm can only live inside a woman for 5 days, not years, I stopped there, you are absolutely stupid if you think a woman is going to fall pregnant at 60 with maybe a lovers sperm that has been in her body for years. You NEED help dickhead!

The whole idea that a fetus can be affected by any additional sperm is beyond ludicrous.

"If you can't say something nice about someone (something), say nothing."

All you wankers blaming his sick scribblings on Feminism. It doesn't have anything to do with this. Maybe Femin-Nazis are like this, a lot of collegiate idiots are, but not real Feminists.

How could anyone dream up such a load of garbage?.

I am convinced , cucks are mentally disturbed and should be eliminated at the nearest FEMA camp along with every single fucking liberal asshole. Liberals are like the Borg on Star Trek, A collective of brainwashed weak minded things that alone cant have an original thought

is best description.

Obviously, your mother never read any of these LW stories prior to giving you some good advice.

Just fucking bullshit. Fucking fag, cuck bullshit. I hoe you rot in hell.

stevessv

Sorry, chief, but your tale is one of so very many that have been dumped in the Loving Wife genre category; that is wife gets to selfishly fuck around....cuck hubby has to accept his humilation and lowly position in revised alpha male hierarchy. Cuckoldry is a Fetish and your tale was best placed there. The last segment of the story blew my mind...and not in a good way. Let me get this straight....freshly fucked slut wife returns from a week of fucking with others, to return to the poor submissive hubby to discuss whose sperm will ultimately impregnate her. She tells hubby that if he cums in her frequently the resulting child will be much more likely to have hubby's features. This motivates cuck hub to cum big time, and your readers are expected to believe that all will be well??!!!! I call bullshit...now I don't know what possessed you to have the wife come up with such a bizarre theory of sex based characteristics. I have scoured the Net looking for any factual basis for such a ridiculous assertion and came up with zip! My take on the conversation betwèen slut wife and cuck at the end was simply that regardless of the true sperm donor, hubby was going to get saddled raising a potentially bastard child. Sounds like just the ticket to guarranty a stable and truly loving long term marriage....NOT!!!!!!

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I enjoyed it. Yes it's probably a send up of the cuck genre but I thought it actually shed some light on the mindset of the fetishists. And it's funny in places. I laughed when I read the line about the wheaties and lizard shit.

Get your insecurities under control people! Sheesh.

If my wife left for a week with a lover, I'd be gone when she got back. The only thing she'd find is my ring with a note saying: "Catch me if you can slut"!

I'm sorry I could only give it one star...

Clarkgable

Even you admitted in your own words that you regarded this contribution as a fetish tale. You also asserted that this was a spoof on the cuck wimp hubby genre. From my reading of this story, I found no comment by the author that he meant his story as a satire. Indeed, if you had bothered to scan stevessv's profile and other stories you would have seen that the author has submitted several other works based on cuckoldry. I'm not even sure that he meant his story to be taken humourously. Rather than simply criticize other commentators' reactions, wouldn't it be more productive for you to submit a story or two of your own?!!!

I totally wasted my time reading this. I'll never get those minutes back. Normally, I don't comment if I don't like something, but this was so bad ...

Hooked

Saved myself the effort of going through the crap story by taking on board the strong comments about this cuckhold garbage. Saved myself the need to get angry at more of the shit that ruins the loving wife's genre. I repeat give cuck shite its own catogary please so we can put all this wimp shit in one dump and ignore it.

This author is trying to get the lowest possible score he can.

Just to offset the asshole of LIT! He reads every cuck story on here and then bitches about them. I think he's a real closet cuck and his wife has fucked the fleet!!!

can you please remove cuckshit to a new cuckshit catagory of its own-so men wont have to put up with this sickening garbage

Only after a half page of crap reading. I may got eye cancer already.

Please do not copy cum farted drivel from latrine walls anymore!!!

Aimi told Jeremy right from the start that there will always be other men and Jeremy accepted that. After that it is the job for all men to keep Aimi happy. Instead of having this as a secret wish and being in marriages where topics can not be brought into the open we see in Aimi that life can really be very simple if the preconditions are laid out bluntly at the start. Girls and young women reading this might admire how simple and open life became for Aimi when she told of her requirements. And not just told, but actually went out to find other fucks while courtship was progressing so that Jeremy knew exactly how the roll out would be. Aimi is a free spirit. There will be many who would say that she will always be alone, or never find a steady lover but the attention, here on Lit, which these stories attract show me that there is a large pool of men who would accept this in a relationship and would exult if they could bring onto their wives the EXTRA happiness which Aimi enjoys and which most women do not.

There are many men, again here on Lit, who read these stories and all say the same things in their comments. They would kill the bitch. They would clean out the bank accounts and use the legal system to claim all the assets. I say to this that the girl or young women who lays it all out at the courtship stage would gain much if speaking of her needs she provoked such outburst at once, not getting to experience that behaviour years on from now. Aimi has nothing to do with such men. Her way weeds them out almost as soon as she has met them. Fish need water to swim in and women like Aimi though rare at the present time would find no shortage of men willing and ready to bow to her needs. Many read these stories here on Lit.

Young women starting out in dating should try this: make outrages demands like Aimi and see for themselves that there really is scope for having your cake and eating it.

I am compelled to read it again, and maybe again and...

What a curious study of this odd couple. This will be in my mind for a long time.

Thank you!

Man, I need to know the name of those 'shrooms you're eating... or smoking. Seriously, a quirky, tongue-in-cheek read. Loved it!

YOU literary redefine mentally ill and stupid to previously unplumbed depths.

Your ObamaCare does cover mental health issues, you just need to recognize you have those problems and then you can move forward to resolving them or.....as a last resort, run across the Mass Turnpike at 3:30pm any day Monday through Friday.

5 stars, wonderfully written and strange at the same time. Well done!!!

The proof of how good this story is is that the Incels are up in arms

Interesting view? Yes? Interesting story? Maybe for some. Personally, I believe that males and females are instinctually possessive. She definitely wasn't allowing him to lead her lifestyle. He may know how to make her happy, but there is decidedly something wrong with him.

I totally loved this story. I knew exactly what I wanted in a wife—average intelligence but an insatiable promiscuous slut, determined to be set for life thanks to her rich husband. She never hides her affairs. She knows that nothing makes me harder. I love her so much…

Horror.

I'm sorry. For all the skill that went into it, the characters are detestable on all levels. They're all self-delusional and deceiving, they abuse each other, and the story is just a mess on the floor.

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I admire your skill in describing characters emotional states in a semi-stoic manner, but it also leaves them very cold toward each other.

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Be well!