by lesyeuxnoirs
I liked it , it was very well writen, and I would have loved it if it was writen in third person. Why don't you give it a try with your next story.
Oh and it was very very hot!!!
At the beginning you said the hero was 'Christian', but then he says his name is 'Christopher', which is his name for the rest of the chapter. It's a great story, but that small difference can be really confusing.
I got lost in the story. Please I hope you continue this as it is wonderful :) well done
Mon Dieu! That was soooo erotic.
Bravo for combining a vampire with
a willing, nay, eager virgin's defloration.
Very well done!
Merci à toi, lesyeuxnoirs.