All Comments on 'Sex and Blood'

by lesyeuxnoirs

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chris_brownchris_brownalmost 11 years ago
Great job

Hopefully there's a second chapter coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I liked it , it was very well writen, and I would have loved it if it was writen in third person. Why don't you give it a try with your next story.

Oh and it was very very hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
You messed up.

At the beginning you said the hero was 'Christian', but then he says his name is 'Christopher', which is his name for the rest of the chapter. It's a great story, but that small difference can be really confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it!

I got lost in the story. Please I hope you continue this as it is wonderful :) well done

angeldustjaangeldustjaalmost 11 years ago
Wow

That was extremely erotic. Floating sex must be hot.

LeFrog08LeFrog08almost 11 years ago
Wow, indeed!

Mon Dieu! That was soooo erotic.

Bravo for combining a vampire with

a willing, nay, eager virgin's defloration.

Very well done!

Merci à toi, lesyeuxnoirs.

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