by Trol_lor
Does it really matter which catigory the story is in? I loved the beginning and I would like it very much if you continued with this one.
I like where this is going. She could well be his half sister. Historically accurate for the time and place. I hope you continue.
It is very taboo for slave owners to engage sexually with slaves, this is in the right category.
What little I read was painful to read. Has the thought ever occurred to you to learn English? You should give it a try.
I think the reason it is in Incest/Taboo and not Interracial is because in the days of slavery it would have been Taboo for a slave owner's son to want to get married to and have sex with a slave. Looking forward to reading more of this story.
This story is twice as long as it should be, for instance:
"Johnny is a man now, he has been tempted by sinful sick thoughts running around in his head."
She thought.
This should be:
"Johnny is a man now, he has been tempted by sinful sick thoughts running around in his head," she thought.
Your story would be easier to read with this simple change. In addition, I don't think slaves had the ability to refuse their masters anything. This story is hard to believe and i don't see it improving.