All Comments on 'Sex and Suicide'

Well, I didn't see much romance in this and I didn't see a point. Go back to start and try again. Good luck.

Congratulations on publishing your first story! You have some great ideas, but I wonder if everything was all too brief.

.....if you tell us what happens next. Does Jack kill himself anyway? Or do he and Karen have seven kids and stay married for 50 years? Or does one of them kill the other? Endless possibilities! Don't go back to square one -- write chapter two! Thanks for writing!

First story with quite a bit of possibility though no erotica at all. Interesting characters worth development, humorous, but storyline is sparse.

Maybe the guy should be less creepy, women hate it when creepers walk up and say things like "I wanna fuck you." Um... learn my name first and then maybe that will happen later.

A very abrupt end, but I liked the brutal honesty of making your characters somewhat unlikable. An unflinching view of someone's behavior when they are insecure, afraid, depressed, and lonely.

Sort of odd, bit quick