by liviana_lavanda
Despite being extremely short, not really a story at all, you found a way not to proofread it and leave it filled with errors worthy of a much longer tale.
@Anonymous Typical bitchy comment from someone who probably hasn't written anything longer than their own name.
Sure, there were a couple of errors, but it was far from "filled with errors."
I enjoyed it, and couple of things I noticed didn't take away from the eroticism of the story.