All Comments on 'Sex, Ed!'

I was not expecting

Whole story was perfect. A wonderful surprising ending that makes me long for more. Maeve is a dream come true.

M. Night Shyamalan around here

Continue with next chapters

But had trouble with the first person setup. It makes the story feel like notes from a plot you're making up as you go. "Mom does this, then Ed does this, then Dad does this", and so on.

And fictional sex with condoms is off-putting too, even though eventually they were dispensed with.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Maeve is a Dominatrix. She has had Ed lie and cheat on only the second woman he has ever made love to, his own Mother! What sort of Sex Education is that? That’s abusive beyond words! That’s evil.

Obviously, this story should continue. Ed has so much more to learn. Maeve hasn’t pegged Ed or his Father yet. Ed hasn’t fucked his Mom’s ass. Maeve hasn’t cuckolded Ed’s Father, by forcing him to hide in the closet while she pegs his wife and/or son. She hasn’t forced Ed’s Dad to watch while Maeve and Ed spit-roast Ed’s Mom!

In the final chapter, Ed must assume his complete dominance, first by fucking his father. And then, Ed must demand that Maeve fully service his family, first sexually, then financially, also helping him seduce another wife/mistress/lover his own age (possibly Maeve’s niece or half-sister, someone Maeve is desperate to keep “pure”), and finally by Maeve becoming pregnant by Ed and/or his father.

If you’re going to go for a dark twist, don’t go halfway.

Ed got his sex ed arranged, but twisted it so dad and friend could now be friends with benefits as well ass Ed getting Mom. I think next show be a family party ith Maeve and dad's coworker as well!

Wow sucha Hot Plot. I think we all suspected Ed would eventually fuck Maeve for extra training, but with a nice twist turns out She planned it all! Excellent sexual Tale worthy of Five Stars! We do hope you add another chapter or two.

The end really unexpected

learn how to write. Proper grammar and verb tense would be a start

Regrets that one comment complains of terrible grammar. Perhaps that troll's bigger issue is any work on the Lit site? This story had only one significant error:

"Baby, you're (sic) your tongue is really making Mommy horny"

Any other grammar-check flags were small calls about word pairs perhaps done better with a hyphen or as one word.

And "Sex, Ed!" was a was fairly enjoyable read. Thanks, man_as_dog!

Regrets that one comment complains of terrible grammar. Perhaps that troll's bigger issue is any work on the Lit site? This story had only one significant error:

"Baby, you're (sic) your tongue is really making Mommy horny"

Any other grammar-check flags were small calls about word pairs perhaps done better with a hyphen or as one word.

And "Sex, Ed!" was a was fairly enjoyable read. Thanks, man_as_dog!

The father and son needed a scene where they might clash or obliquely arrive at mutual understanding. Other then that - The bait and hook were set masterfully and author played me like trout.

Full marks *****

good, hot story with nice twist at the end. thanks