All Comments on 'Sex for My Life'

by SoldierofSex

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aclassyladyaclassyladyalmost 9 years ago
good

It was good but it felt a bit rushed to me. It has the potential to be a good story if you want to carry off another chapter. My only suggestion is to slow it down a bit.

SoldierofSexSoldierofSexalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Reply to Aclassylady

Thanks I agree I'll do so :)

SamCartierSamCartieralmost 9 years ago
Hot

Drove me wild.

Sam

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