by Galloglaich
Nice chapter even if as you said a little short, some of the ------ were fine, though I'm not sure why you had Tom's phone stolen if nothing of consequence happened because of it, not only that you didn't even show what went on when Tom confronted the thief or if he even confronted the thief to get back his phone and stuff. The other skip where the whole sex scene between Tom and Aeril occurred didn't really make sense especially since you thought the previous chapter lacked sex.
I'm liking your new series, though it would be nice to have an inkling of where the story is going rather than just having sporadic scenes interspersed and unlinked. I'm hoping that Tom gets his demon harem after it's known that he's uniquely capable of fulfilling their needs (well I can dream).
Looking forward to more chapters from you after you hiatus from your first series.
Actually, while it's a white star not a green one, Sol outputs more green photons than any other color. So in a way, it could be seen as green.