All Comments on 'Sex on the Air Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

way too short.. only one page for a chapter....yes im a writer and I write the outline.. then the story in its entirety and then post in chapters if I'm gonna post it.

cabernetguycabernetguyover 7 years ago
made me laugh so hard

I know this is supposed to be an erotic story, but as the chaos unfolded in the newsroom, i just imagined this happening to the people I watch nightly, and how out of control and over the top this would be to actually see happen. "She threw her head backed and screamed as the orgasm took her. Next to her Jim convulsed as his climax took him. His face contorted and he moaned. Around the room, moans, sighs, and shrieks of ecstasy could be heard." Well written, fun(ny) story, gave me a really good laugh. Thanks!!

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