All Comments on 'Sex on the Beach Front'

You need to write more, but to include a little privacy between the couples that are doing the action. Play in a little dismissal of birth control, too.

You did a great job building this story and touching a lot of bases. Very hot action. Keep up the good storying

Well written. A lovely and believable scenario with loads of sensual detail that took me there and it was a red hot place to be. And it was without typos or bad grammar to get in the way of the sensuallity. Absolutely brilliant. More please.