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KevinSaxKevinSaxover 4 years ago
Mediocre

Keep writing, you’ll get better with time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Cracking

This is an amazing story, you are very talented

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good initial submission

Godo start, work on fleshing out the story a bit. Maybe get an editor/proof reader to help you with grammer and structure. Looking forward to part 2.

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Just looking to test my writing skills and tailor some stories to the many fetishes out there

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