by moontree
Though the paragraphs were sooo long, when I finally reached the end, it was worth it. Good job!
You are an absolutely awesome writer, please keep writingas I have never read such an interesting and well put together story on this site. Again awesome
Not gonna lie I got turned on so much by this that I left the screen here so I would remember to rate your story after sex. Really beautiful stuff, writing was amazingly detailed , didn't mind the longer sections either. I look forward to reading anything else you have.