All Comments on 'Sex , Salt, Sand and Sweat'

by moontree

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cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 16 years ago
wow

Though the paragraphs were sooo long, when I finally reached the end, it was worth it. Good job!

VernoVernoabout 16 years ago
awesome

You are an absolutely awesome writer, please keep writingas I have never read such an interesting and well put together story on this site. Again awesome

Kirbyman01Kirbyman01over 7 years ago
Made me hop on my man.

Not gonna lie I got turned on so much by this that I left the screen here so I would remember to rate your story after sex. Really beautiful stuff, writing was amazingly detailed , didn't mind the longer sections either. I look forward to reading anything else you have.

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