All Comments on 'Sex Slave to the Mafia Boys'

I really wanted to love this story but the frequent grammar mistakes make it just to difficult to slog through. Please consider finding an editor and reposting.

I don’t why but this wasn’t for me. It literally cramped my stomach when “Bethany” said she was a virgin. Idk but dang!

Wow, you're a really great writer! I love the objectification, foul language and intimidation. This is so hot! Thank you for making the mafiosos callous and heartless, true to form. It's better this way, I think. Just YUM!!!