by StoryofC
Ah! I didn't expect that, honestly. I hope you add more soon.
This is a good story but see if you can make the chapters a little longer. By the time you get into things, it's over. Then you wait ages for the next chapter only for a teaser again. It's a bit frustrating. But I like the characters (Chloe at least, not sure about Marcus) and the storyline is unique. I hope to read more soon.
Thank you again for following the series. I know I take a long time. This project is practice for writing a story longer than a short story and I'm learning as I go. Thank you so much for the feedback. I will have Ch. 7 in much quicker than before.
*smiles*
Welcome back. Another great chapter.... i'm curious to see what trouble Chloe will end up in from running out of class before it ended. Keep up the excellent writing.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Thank you for the character development lesson as well. Are you able to expand on your comment? Where do you feel a female character was either a sissy or a bully in this particular chapter? Also, this series is found in nonconsent/reluctance. If this story offends you, perhaps another category would better strike your fancy.
Hey! So I have been following your story for quite some time. I love it. The story is well written. I can't wait to see what happens to Chloe!