by Amsterdick
story could go on for several more chapters if the author felt like it.
I noticed that a little over halfway through you changed the name of one of the rapists. I just thought that you would like to correct that. All the way through his name is "Ronaldo" and for a while it gets changed to "Roberto" Other than that it was an excellent story :)
Thanx for all the comments I got. I've changed the editing mentioned by anonymous USA . By the way, I am open to suggestions on how to continue this story. Cheers, A.
I want to see the old girlfriend raped by the new girlfriend and then double teamed by them both. One in her ass and the new girlfriend sucked out by the old girlfriend.
Are you for real? If this is not a stupid ass story, nothing is! Typical cuckold crap... it was so funny, the rapists are actually going to tape their crime, and introduce themselves with their names? LOL more like an idiotic comedy story!
This got me all wet and wanting to be taken...to be raped and used...fuck what a cum I had, thank you.
This story was amazing. The characters have great appeal and the sex is hot
Superb story. Definitely need a sequel. Perhaps our hero should rape Darla for real in Part 2. With assistance from Scarlet.
This story was super, the sequel should be outstanding with you and Scarlett (and Darla's friends all in masks as you all rape her over and over and Darla learning to suck pussy and assholes and it is all on tape. Sounds awesome. Keep up the good work, I like the pace and the sex scenes, I am dripping now thanks to you!
She started to like to like it and that's when I stopped reading. It's not hot if she likes it and feels good. Not intense for me!