by DickSwett
Good Start.
Leaves lots of room for lots of sexy fun in future chapters. Gave it a 5 more on potential than the sex itself. Good writing though and enjoying the verbal exchange between the new roomies. cp
Great start on a good possible series of stories. It would be nice to have a roommate to explore with.
I love the story and the characters. Innocent yet sexual. The character descriptions were wonderful and look forward to their friendship growing.
I didn't like the beginning as Aidan was super hard pressuring Logan "do it!" "Show it!" As I could clearly see Logan was not feeling comfortable. To the point I wasn't feeling comfortable even though I'm gay, being pressured like that would be bordering on harassment for me. Aidan needs to let Logan to slowly open for more not to force him into sex like that.
Had me on the edge of my chair awaiting one of them to take the load orally. Great story.