All Comments on 'Sexy Adventure in St. Croix Pt. 01'

by okayjack

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I love it when wife and hubby share erotic adventures!

No guilt, no attitude, just pure horny sexy fun. Thanks for sharing.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

ps...your story desperately needs editing out the frequent typos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sorry you can't satisfy your wife.

Good thing you have lots of help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
YOU NEED AN EDITOR....

Switching back and forth between her lovers really is confusing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You write like I'm your husband and you are expecting me to come down

And go down on you and reclaim you? Won't you be suprised when I never show up, but only send divorce papers? You ard totally unnecessary to my living a full and contented life.

BigJim48BigJim48over 4 years ago
Adventure in Writing

I'd like to volunteer to be your editor! You really should get one. The story is so screwed up, switching from 3rd person to 2nd person. He/she to you & back again. Really detracted from the story.

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 4 years ago

Well that ruins it for hubby..... asta lavista bitch

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Whorewife

Never send your whorewife out alone, unless like this author you enjoy being a cuck.

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