All Comments on 'Sexy Date Nights After Divorce'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Punctuation and paragraphs was weird, too broken up. Story was just trying to be too edgy, didn't really flow. Humiliation and other stuff gets stupid...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Not good.

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I'm an amateur writer, I enjoy writing down my fantasies sometimes. I like slight- or not so slight- dominant/submissive vibes, spanking, pain play, that's my cup of tea.