All Comments on 'Sexy Librarian'

This was absolutely wonderful and just what I needed to see and read after a long frustrating day at work :) I LOVED how she teased him at first, keeping him at bay until he could stand it no longer. Fabulous!

Nice. Compact. Sexy scenario. Not really a story, just the middle of a scene from a story. For me, the tease could have gone on longer, been stretched out more. I think the D/s elements could have been explored more too. I did enjoy the power exchange in the middle. That felt natural and hot.

I did have a problem with POV in the story. I know, this is third-person omniscient. But, my head would snap around when you would shift from what he was seeing to what she was hearing. Even if you’re going to be omniscient, I would rather stay with one character’s head and POV for longer and switch less often. Maybe make the POV switch once when they make the power exchange. That would emphasize the control shift. Make sense?

At least there are no fines for being over-due.

extraordinary arousal barely made it to the end ..

more please let me clean you out after the taste would guarantee another erection.