All Comments on 'Shades of Brown'

by TxRad

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

And maybe her older sisters were jealous of her!

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UncleGrahamUncleGraham11 months ago

Too short to score...

muskyboymuskyboy11 months ago

Not a story. Good opening few paragraphs for a story though.......

oldsage_1oldsage_111 months ago

Oh my garsh! I thought you were going off on some incest or another interracial then BOOM! Towel drops! End of story!

I bet it took longer to post it on the site than to write it! 😉

5 stars (one for each paragraph)! Sorry for busting your chops, I really did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing both your fantasies and your talent.

Cheers

SAGE

PS: I should have read the other comments! Tough crowd out tonight! LOL! Short but dammit it was/is good! Awww! You have spoiled us, your fans, we now expect voluminous tales from the Texas Shakespeare of Literotica!

dmallorddmallord11 months ago

Enjoyed the view! Nice 750-word work.

storyteller4u2storyteller4u211 months ago

Simple and delightful, great starter for the imagination to go anywhere it is going to go!

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