All Comments on 'Shadow School Ch. 03'

I had one of those orgasms once- hit this spot with a vibrator and yeah- if hers was anything like that one then she definately saw stars

Excellent character development. If the coming sex scenes are anything like what we have seen it will be a fantastic story: one of the best! His power is fascinating and mysterious. I can't wait for what is to come.

i love it nice build up

I only read this 3rd chapter, it was very well done. Want to read what happens next!! oh and BTW how many applicants really got the scholarships?

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

As for scholarships I think 21 girls were offered the chance but they will announce the 7 at the ball.

It's not explained yet but it will be soon... the lure of almost a full scholarship lures the parents of the girls to visit the school... twenty one girls are chosen to be interviewed then that night they'll announce the 7 who get the scholarships... the others have already been accepted to the school, they just don't get the big boost.

And of course, the girls are chosen for a reason...

i like the subtle amounts of sexual interaction. it is rare to find a composure of erotic literature that can slowly build a sexual atmosphere while not allowing it to cloud the plot. in this story the plot and the atmosphere are each clearly defined, the characters have depth and the sex is written with descriptive eloquence . excellent work

wow. ;0)

I chanced upon this and I'm really impressed! Love the mysterious sense behind the 7 houses! Argh... okay I have to continue reading now.

This story is definitely taking a twist, and it's very well-written. Keep up the good work!

I think I just had a orgasm by just reading this chapter. You a wonderful writer keep up the great job.

Again, WTF?!

Okay, that was pretty darn HOT! But weird story at the moment cos there is so much still unexplained. Definately intrigued though!

I absolutely love this. The writing is fantastic and the character developement keeps you glued to the screen! This story is so intriguing and I can't wait to find out more. Tonight might just be a late night for me if I can't stop reading!

Such a hot story :)

Confusing and very slow, I don't mean the sex either.

Nothing is explained just a few chicks randomly acting out sexually. No real explanation. Ist a why am I reading this type story? 8 full pages in and I still don't know what I'm reading.

What a load of rubbish.

I know it's 7 years since the writer was here but others might see this and TURN BACK NOW !

Anonymous comments should be banned

But the intrigue is still there. I'm really liking this so far.

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