All Comments on 'Shadows In The Dark'

by the time you'd intro'd all the characters, there was no room for the fucking

I agree with the earlier comment about there being too many characters ... I'm really not sure who's with

who ... but this implies there will be more to the story, involving some combination of the others, and I'm

looking forward to reading the rest of the story...

I loved this story. The surprise and the realization and the fact that she wasn't already bi made this so hot.

You've got a lot of characters and a great scene setup. Why not do more.. perhaps a line of surprize hookups?

Very hot. Great work!

there needs to be more!!! they never made it to the lake!

what better way to get to more sex........ a orgy is definitely waiting.

A great start but there needs to be more...perhaps a second chapter.

A great beginning, so many possibilities

This story didn’t end, it just stopped. Bad move.