All Comments on 'Shale's Heroine: Hatching'

I love trans stories and this one was great, the lead in was not overly elaborate but sufficient. The characters well crafted without dragging it on too much, But the sex was exquisite, you made it detailed and long avoid a common mistake erotica writers make by doing the opposite. Really top notch stuff. Only thing that would make it better would be if it were guy on trap rather than futa, consider writing a story like that if you are into it and I will definitely read it.

Superb story, very well done. I think you could definitely use these characters again, they felt like real people.