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by Praevaricator

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

Story rushed.

Sex rushed.

Lacks details.

Two stars.

papermache00papermache00almost 2 years ago

Very hot! Please write more

PraevaricatorPraevaricatoralmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your feedback, Anon. The story had a word count limit and needed to be rushed.

PraevaricatorPraevaricatoralmost 2 years agoAuthor

@papermache00 I will be working on writing more, these are all short snips of spice based on IRL events.

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I have been writing since I was around ten years of age, and I have been a ghostwriter for over fourteen years. I lean towards the Erotica genre, with a heavy dose of BDSM because I have a passion for that lifestyle and live it actively. I also make sure to spice my stories wi...