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Click hereWhen I thought of my mirror fantasy, I was suddenly eager to do doggy. As Brandon began fucking my pussy from behind, I imagined I was behind him fucking him in the ass with a big strap-on. I heard him grunting and started making quiet pig grunts to mock him. Brandon didn't hear them.
When he began moving faster, I began moving, too. With practice, I was able to move forward when he was moving back, and when we moved into each other, the collision jarred both of us. The pain made me more excited.
As our bodies crashed together faster and harder, I began making the pig squeals. I tried to keep them soft, too, but Brandon must have heard because he stopped and asked me if he was hurting me.
"No!" I yelled at the bed. "Don't stop now!"
He started again and tried to be more gentle until I said, "Faster! Harder!"
I closed my eyes and started squealing again in rhythm with his pounding. I tried to control the volume so he wouldn't hear me and stop again. In my mind, I was ripping into his ass while he was shrieking and I was squealing like a pig to torment him. When I came, it was like an earthquake.
Now, doggy is my favorite position, and Brandon no longer stops when he hears my grunts and squeals. It drives him wild as I go nuts until I have a dynamite orgasm. If he knew what was going through my mind, he'd run as far from me as he could and I'd never see him again.
My monster is gasping but still hasn't given up. She recently put another disgusting thought into my head.
What if some day Brandon brings up my eating his ass out? I've never mentioned it again, so it would be without any prompting from me. Could that be the trigger for the second scenario?
I have fun thinking about it, but it's a trigger that's never going to be pulled. Brandon never talks about sex. He prefers action. If the subject ever comes up in company, he'll listen but won't say anything.
That's the reason he won't see this if I post it online. I'm sure he's looked at Internet porn. Who hasn't? But he'd never read erotic stories.
Earlier I suggested my story was an example for young couples, to show them they can still have a happy marriage despite the horrible things they do to each other. That's true, but I admit I'm not writing this only as a public service. The reason I've spent so much time on it is because of what happens every time I work on it. It's happening right now. And I'm not even touching myself!
My monster is whispering to me that if this is posted on a website, I can read it and think about others reading it at the same time. Imagining that has already made me come a few times.
All I can say for sure is there's no hurry. I've enjoyed writing this, and now I'll have fun deciding whether to share it.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoAnother ugly story from Ed. PLEASE stop posting.
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhether you like this sort of theme or not, its totally original and just leaves me with a 1000 thoughts, all going in different directions.... Damn amazing, and its very well written too. I do admire creativity wherever it takes you. Thank you Edrider and welcome back!
Creeperclawabout 4 years agoshe has serious issues. She has some kind of pathological need to dominate her husband in every way possible, knowing that he'd never retaliate. The only time he ever gets back at her is when she (foolishly) gives him permission to do whatever he wants while her ass is open to him. Sane people don't plan to trap/trick their spouses into stuff they'd never go for and then respond in hostile vengeance when it doesn't pan out the way they wanted it.
A previous commenter was right that these stories of yours would be much different once the restraints come off of the husbands, but you've cleverly circumvented that possibility by having them be so submissive that the thought of outrage, violence or legal action doesn't even pop into their heads.
Gotta say though this one was rare in that the wife actually has anal sex, so it's a 3/5 for me.
MichaelFitzgeraldabout 4 years agoI have been criticized for pushing the edge on a story so I comment here with some caution. This was about her. It was not about him other than as way to set the boundaries of decency. You've been down this road before but you didn't drive the car over the cliff. This time, you drove the car over the cliff. The suspension of disbelief is not that anyone would do such things. The point of Hannibal Lector as a character is that someone does such things. My disbelief is roused by the lack of consequence.
Having been treated so badly, how does Brandon seemingly let it all go? How does he not take his fists to her? How does he not go, and never look back? Prey run when there's a predator. Brandon sits there, surrendering to no purpose. Children seem impossible. Love, hard to see that either and certainly not on the resolution you laid out.
This is maybe the best thing you've written but the end is ill-conceived. Thanks for the near perfect tone of squick.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoGotta figure you're a 300 lb rabid feminazi who gets off on fantasizing about raping men because no one would take you to your high school prom. If this site allowed snuff stories, that's what you'd be writing.
You should really think about seeing a shrink, although they'd probably report you to the police after your first consult, post armed guards, and have their attorney file a restraining order to permanently keep you off their property.
Seriously; get some professional help for your psychosis.
