All Comments on 'Shaming Carly'

Nice to see your byline again hairysurfer, it's been too long!!! Normally I love everything about your stories minus one small detail, the fishy smell you describe vaginas having. The presence of a fishy smell is associated with infection, usually bacterial vaginosis. So unless you want your characters to have an infection, I would change the description and not use fishy as an adjective. I've been a fan of your work since you began submitting here so I know with your talent you could come up with an alternate description with little effort. I'm not attracted to African American women so I just inserted my own racial identity in those spots. I'm not trying to be racist or derogatory it's just a personal preference. Obviously I'm not gonna ask you to change races in midstream and besides I'm sure that's an attraction for some and it wouldn't be fair to deny them their pleasure. I gave you stars as always because the story deserved it, it's certainly not your fault or problem I found a few things I'm personally not fond of. Keep up the great work and I hope you can find time to submit more frequently!!! Thanks for sharing, anxiously anticipating your next piece as much as I always have!!!

Thanks for the new story, it was well worth the wait although don't wait as long for the next one. I love all your naughty dirty ass stories and keep up the good work.

describing her shame was so sweet

Extremely gross, but incredible description.