All Comments on 'Shauna’s Diary Ch. 01'

YES YES YES!

This one got me hard as a rock, so sexy and exciting! Loved how you have written this and I am gagging for the next part! Thank you for the best wank i've had in ages that was hot!!!

for the next chapter, Jennifer. It was fantastic (as usual). Jennifer, I hope you are not writing from experience here - that you were not Shaun. It would gall me to think that you had ever been humiliated in this way - you are too nice a person to have that happen to you. Tell Shaun, though, that next time this happens to her I will personally come and kiss her better (especially on the parts where she has been abused).

I, too, had to wank whilst reading this. I always do whenever I read either your stories or your exotic poetry, although I do not do so with your non-erotic poems, which also give me great pleasure.

Please can I change places with Shaun? I guarantee it would not be against my will, but it would make smashing reading.

From her foul mouth I would suspect her to take the lead and teach him a lesson. He needs one.

Is there anyone else in the plot who will ?

Great story, I hope Shauna gets him back, soon. I would like to suggest using an editor. You need to get help with your punctuation and a little spelling too. I'm not trying to be disrespectful, I just would like your wonderful writing to be error-less. Take care and keep writing.

msboy8

Shauna needs to keep fucking him and begin thinking about making a baby with him...

I have to agree with the comment about the editor. But the essence of erotic writing is coming up with a plot and characters that stimulate and arouse. You have certainly done that! Best wishes and thanks for a very arousing read.

Loved Shauna's Diary Jennifer C has a touch for well written NASTY fucking. Give us more.

Nasty Nasty and HOT. Keep up the good work

would love to read more of your writings like this

or lack-there-of, is a total turn off.

Couldn't read past "worth its wait in gold."

Love this style of writing. Please give us chapter 2 and more.