All Comments on 'Shaving Away Straightness'

No character development at all. No sex. Wrong category. Should have been in Gay male. Get an editor? It can't hurt.

Part 2?

Looks like your just getting started here. Don't be discouraged by responses; study other authors. Brit's advice about pushing out shows that you know what you're talking about. While I shave my own cock and balls, I do need my girlfriend to shave my ass. Awkward ... but her fingers do find their way up my ass, which makes up for it.