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CletisCletisabout 8 years ago
Doing more??

Interesting concept. Might have worked in the "mind control" section, but works here too.

I was wondering if Art was ever going to try to put her under while hubby was not around. You seemed to indicate that anyone could use the phrases on her. What would she do if he did think he had put her under? How far would she let things go?

Looking forward to a followup..

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All through school I hated English class and writing stories was painful. Now I am writing stories for pleasure and wished I would have paid attention in class.