All Comments on 'She Almost Got Away'

I can't tell if this is purposely written with such bad grammar as a story-telling technique, or if the author writes that way all the time. Not that interesting, in any case.

"What she seen in him"...... come on! Get someone to help you with your grammar before you post a story. I stopped at this sentence. It's like scratching a chalkboard. I'd correct it and resubmit. Your story sounds interesting but not with grammar mistakes.

Well Damn!

HER Adam's apple??