All Comments on 'She Claims a Master'

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writedoctorwritedoctorover 12 years ago
Enjoyable with an epic hint

Lovely, erotic tale. Romance and lust combined cleverly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice!

Lovely story, my only gripe is it shouldn't be so easy to make an Incubus or the world would be overrun.

KnotbaneKnotbaneover 12 years ago
I'm in love

I love the setting I love the idea. I belive it's to short maybe a bit rushed but all in all a compelling and captivating read I would lik... Nay need to read more of your work like this one

I do have a possible suggestion though it is more male fantasy though female perspective may work but a fairy well for lack of better wording gang bang

sincerly yours knotbane

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
slightly annoyed at the trend

I really wish there was just a brutal story of guy/guys getting their souls sucked. tired of the whole human to master of demonesses thing. I mean I know there are both.... but it's trending so hard towards the latter, that it's breaking my sanity :(

it's like every time, I'm opening a present on christmas, I'm getting coal :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The Present and The Future of Jonathan

Very well written from start to finish. Your writing gift properly used. I am looking forward to following the life of Jonathan and his lover. Thank you for sharing. L

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Damn

Wow. That took me back to the middle ages. Your wording was beautiful. Thank you.

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