All Comments on 'She Knew'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Pretty solid start

Good start? Less about cheating though and more about them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

really good story cant wait for the next chapter

CandaceChereeCandaceChereeabout 12 years ago
:)

It was a great start. Please finish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
hmmmph.,,

BeI Hope that you're gonna keep going with this story. Because it was great!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sequle

please continue this story

QuocalimarQuocalimaralmost 12 years ago
Perfection

I was looking for a good seduction fic. I felt sad for the guy but... Fuck him. XD | Nicely written, perfect cliff hanger for a revenge sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great ending

Very nice ending. Even thru the haze of eroticism, there were glimpses of characters, that might be real. Lauren's shaved pussy jarred me, but what do I know.

I like the story and think you could go with this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Lol @ "Lauren's shaved pussy jarred me"

Funniest thing I've read in a while

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