All Comments on 'She Likes to Watch'

by VoluptuousCara

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NakedDanNakedDanover 9 years ago
Too Short

This has promise, but I would have preferred more. I'd liked to have read about how Carmen's husband was the lucky benefactor of Carmen's horniness after watching the photoshoot.

thebuffalothebuffaloover 9 years ago

Interesting little story. Nicely written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
delicious.

intriguing short .

the sleight of hand with photographer/husband is maybe going to be too subtle for many of the readers ... personaly i thought it was sublime.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

rcrmonte3rcrmonte3over 9 years ago
If You Can't Write A Story

without using hard drugs like cocaine, don't write the story at all. Because of the blatant use of drugs on someone who was already probably drugged out, I would give this story -100*, I don't care how good or bad the writing was. I didn't finish the story due to the drug use and I doubt that I will ever read another of this writers stories.

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