All Comments on 'She Makes the Plans'

by Suburbandad805

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jazzharpjazzharpabout 2 years ago

Part One should be added to your title.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I hope im wrong but these stories always end up with the wife getting felt up and fucked by multiple people while the hubby gets sloppy thirds or fourths. I hope the writer isn't a cuck writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But boring.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice start. Interested to see where this is heading.

Publius68Publius68about 2 years ago

Well, get on with the next installment already!

FyrscapeFyrscapeabout 2 years ago

hope to see the next installment of this soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Looking forward to the continuation. I hope they actually start to enjoy the further experimentation together!

Poacher11Poacher11about 2 years ago

a good start looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue!!!

pepepilotpepepilotabout 2 years ago

I would have liked to know this was a multi-part story. I hope that part 2 is published before everyone forgets about a decent start to what can be a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Off to a good start.

I hope you continue

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