All Comments on 'She Took a Vow to Obey'

Good concept, well-executed. Only quibbles: "pre-approved" is not Victorian English; "sneaked", not "snuck", but try "stole upon her" in its place. Despite quibbles, really good story.

Well written somewhat like the Kinsey experiments.

Keep up the good work.

Most enjoyable....hope you will follow this up with the "home study" and perhaps introduce this simmering volcano of a shy wife to private/semi-public and even fully-public exposure, to vaginal, oral and anal sex, to spanking, slippering, paddling, and to even more humiliating submission. Perhaps a trip back to the Doctor's might be beneficial when she is "ready" ?

Keep up the fine work!!

Kind of a dud!....

Would that Victorian women could have been so liberated! As a modern Dom I try to give them just what Anna Smyth recieved in this new classic tale of Victorian erotica. I don't use the medical equipment, mind you, but the imagination and repressed desires of a submissive wife are timeless and lovely equipment indeed. Bravo ladybug!

So long as you accept it as a complete fairy tale, it has its moments.

Very helpful comments. I will write a sequel. Yes, you do need a suspension of disbelief to enjoy this little fantasy.

This cries out for sequelS

I would suggest one in a private setting

and a separate one with exposure.

The lovely lady could also do with time with a close woman friend.

Splendid prospects, whichever you choose

That one sent me racing to the vibrator! Thank YOU!

I love the Victorians, I love forced orgasms, and I certainly love stern men and beautiful but shy maidens. It's like you wrote this story for me!

PLEASE write a sequel. This was very exciting and stimulating. Love anything Victorian.

I don't know the mechanics of how you made the wife's embarrassment so palpable but it was impossible to stop reading AND feeling her humiliation expand. I was so uncomfortable for her! Please keep up your writing & know that your good work is genuinely appreciated.

Surely the one with the real issue here is Mr Smyth, rather than Anna, Mrs Smyth?

She seems to have no problem reaching climax with other gentlemen (or should I say 'doctors'?)

I think it seems a bit mean to see him as the 'loving husband' looking to cure his 'frigid' wife. I think it surely seems to be the other way around actually.

While I agree it is a bit "mean" of Mr Smyth, in those times, she was his property, nd like any good property owner, he was simply caring for his property. You have to remove your personal values from the equation & think in terms with the times... & writer!

Anyhow... I loved it! Extremely well written & captivating... write more!

This story was simply marvellous. I loved every aspect of it, with the Victorian era and the dominant doctor/apprentices, and the quasi-exhibitionist/public orgasm. Loved loved loved!

Thank you for such a good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and appreciated the historical setting.

If I had a husband who forced me into a position like that, it would be over. This was great to read, but not great for reality.

I really enjoyed this story and its peek into history. Great job!

Bondage, humilition, embarassement, used, exhibited ....... Haven't we all had these fantasies?

First orgasm in front of strangers .... the ultimate fantasy.

Thanks for wtiting this stòry

One of the best histories in the site.

Fantastic!

The attending collogues should have taken turns driving their erections into the lady to reduce her reluctance for intercourse.

The applause was genius