All Comments on 'She Uses Me To Do Her Hubby'

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 11 years ago
Wrong Category

No comment

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioabout 11 years ago
This is gay stuff

Try Fetish or Group Sex next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Editing

Not only is this in the wrong category it is in need of major editing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wrong place...

Trash story anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This reminds me

of a typical x_JohnDoe_x story. Perverted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Piss Poor writing and concept.

This is trash

clearlakequeenclearlakequeenabout 11 years ago
Sounds like fun!

Enjoyed your story and wish I was there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Moreover

Not only is this story in the wrong category, but the acts were just not described in a very erotic way. Instead, it almost seemed clinical. Give us something of the feelings of the other parties.

thebuffalothebuffaloabout 11 years ago

Enjoyed it. Good job.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
3 Statements

Dialogue in this story involved THREE statements"; two by Sweetie in one short paragraphs, one in reply in the next paragraph. The story was carried by narrative! Not the best way to develop a story! WAY not!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice short story

Many women have similar desire. It is easier to get guys to do it than most think.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Ummmmm gay sex is fucking gross and this is not the gay section.

x_witless_xx_witless_xabout 11 years ago
Take the author out and put him up against the wall - the filthy pervert.

my ass is tingling in trepidation. Absolute filth. There must surely be a category all to yourself. 3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
It's not gay if it is a 3 way

It is a little strange that some guys freak about man to man contact in a three way but are happy to jack off while their wives take a stranger bareback. I love watching two women make love and it is only natural for a woman to watch her husband with a man. I have no interest in getting with a dude, but a few time a woman has asked, and I gladly gave it a try. So far I have only topped and its not not bad, awesome actually, to watch a woman masturbate while I make her man my bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well

My cock is hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Erotic couplings maybe

Not really a loving wife. A self centered, manipulative wife maybe. Not very erotic. Kinda boring in fact. Not good.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
No LW

This is nothing more than gay male shit. I guess that speaks to the cuckroaches here.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 2 years ago

Everybody has their fantasies

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