by metacarpal
This is nothing more than gay male shit. I guess that speaks to the cuckroaches here.
Not really a loving wife. A self centered, manipulative wife maybe. Not very erotic. Kinda boring in fact. Not good.
It is a little strange that some guys freak about man to man contact in a three way but are happy to jack off while their wives take a stranger bareback. I love watching two women make love and it is only natural for a woman to watch her husband with a man. I have no interest in getting with a dude, but a few time a woman has asked, and I gladly gave it a try. So far I have only topped and its not not bad, awesome actually, to watch a woman masturbate while I make her man my bitch.
my ass is tingling in trepidation. Absolute filth. There must surely be a category all to yourself. 3*
Many women have similar desire. It is easier to get guys to do it than most think.
Dialogue in this story involved THREE statements"; two by Sweetie in one short paragraphs, one in reply in the next paragraph. The story was carried by narrative! Not the best way to develop a story! WAY not!
Not only is this story in the wrong category, but the acts were just not described in a very erotic way. Instead, it almost seemed clinical. Give us something of the feelings of the other parties.
Not only is this in the wrong category it is in need of major editing.