All Comments on 'She Who Controls The Past Pt. 03'

This well scripted storyline is so captivating; a sci fi/fantasy theme that is emotionally thought provoking by virtue of the way you engage believable characters who feel knowable. One minute this reader smiles at the fantasy nature of the piece and next minute caught up in the erotic tension or maybe doubt/touch of fear or simply frenetic sex that truly reflects the storyline. After all, in really fine erotic fiction the sex is never gratuitous rather it is the story; the theme/plot is reflected in the sex. You certainly achieved that in “She Who Controls The Past”. This fantasy could end now or not; I thoroughly enjoyed what I’ve read. The epilogue (?) or postscript to this chapter is pitch perfect; love the line: “Since you didn't understand, I'll just need to show you..." Easily 5 🌟