All Comments on 'Shelly'

Great story.

Please allow me one pedantic note:

Discrete means separate, distinct.

Discreet mean tactfully or subtly hidden or under cover.

There, got that over with.

I like the observation that men don't vibrate!

Surprised that Shelly was a) friends with the bad girl when they were younger, given she's so conservative, and b) so willing to try marijuana without a second thought.

But it makes the story go with a sexual zing and it's very exciting.

Erotic, plausible and well written. Bravo!

Love how Shelly just got turned...and I mean..Turned!!!!

This wasn’t at all plausible by any stretch of the imagination. Going from a mild, albeit frustrated, pastor’s wife to smoking dope and having wild lesbian sex in one morning just doesn’t make any sense. It would have been better to have the seduction process take place over several days and to have her express more anxiety and worry than she did.

Do part 2 soon wlth Shelly and laurie. good story.

Great story! Well written. Maybe a little more apprehension/ resistance from Shelly at the beginning, but still a great premise. Perhaps in part 2, Shelly seduces a woman of her own in her small hometown....

Terrific, obviously comosed by a very experienced Lesbian.

further not farther

I don't have any problem with the grammar or the seduction. It is a fun, erotic story. Having been very active in the Southern Baptist Convention in a former life it has enough detail to make it believable

liked it, very erotic,,both characters interesting.