All Comments on 'Shelter from the Storm Pt. 01'

by Raven_Feather

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great start to the story. Maybe in part 2, Aston should get a tour, which would include an explanation of what happens when slaves fail to obey promptly and properly -- maybe a room with restraints for punishments -- maybe corporal, but maybe just "required" taking of the largest of the brotherhood for a specified period of time. Just so his decision to stay is fully informed. And a sampling at least of the other brothers . . . .

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Brilliant. In my head I would love to be Anson and be penetrated by Sam and James. More please!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Excellent! Can’t wait to read more!

Kmacdogal20Kmacdogal207 months ago

Great start to a hopefully lonh series

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

You should make it so in part two Anson meets some of the other slaves and learns that the slaves have ways of preparing other slaves to be fuck. Here are some examples, rimming, using sex toys, paddling, and putting them in chastity cages.

TanizakiLadyTanizakiLady7 months ago

Totally loved this because you struck a perfect balance between desire and coercion. Can't wait to see more chapters!

subbi42subbi424 days ago

wonderful, wonderful i love it

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