by Bulgakov
the more it gets unpleasant. It started out fun and now.... you create a woman character who is blackmailing her husband and completly ignoring her situation in life. she risks her marriage but of course you made a man who just follows. not only a guy will be bothered in the end no her kids too. I don't know how that ads to your sexual kick but I think it's killing the whole story. I don't feel excitement after reading a chapter like this. destroying a marriage with all the victims is not erotic.