All Comments on 'She's the Boss'

Great Story!!!

i added you to my favorites!

Very non-con but a hot lil fantasy!

Dear anonymous,

Thanks for taking the time to provide (anonymous) feedback about my dumb story. You're correct, the sensible thing to do in this situation is to report Miss H to the police...how could I miss such a glaringly obvious plothole in my erotic opus? I apologise that this 'fantasy' story about things that are a 'fantasy'...I.e. made up... is not realistic and straight forward enough for you.

Next time I'll make sure that I write a story grounded in gritty realism, so that nothing interesting, exciting or unrealistic happens. Then I'll be sure to post it on an erotic story website simply to read more of your riveting feedback.

Yours sincerely,

Me.

P.s...go and do something interesting to your own arsehole.

Great story. Loved the plot and my only negative was it was too short. Would have loved it if Nicola tempted/forced Dan into more situations before his wife was brought in.

Great story,

Cant wait until the next one

Please continue this story. i was very aroused the entire read. i would love to see how it plays out having them both at Her whim. And about that Anon comment.... i never get why people continue to read Femdom stories if they are not into that and then post shitty comments. Go read something boring and vanilla if that's more your speed, anon.

I LOVED this one, I really like your stories... now that I have your attention, any chance you'll ever continue your Our Little Secret story? The way it ended it hinted at more awesome fun to occur with other characters, so wondering if you'll ever have interest in continuing that one. It's one of my favorites!

Well written Plot! This could almost be a movie. Thank you

a fantastic story. it would be a pity to end it here....you have so many different options on how to take the story further....maybe nicola having his wife fuck other men in front of him and his wife becoming his domme as well as nicola being his domme.

If you want to talk about plot holes, here's a doosie. In what twisted world could a husband buy underwear six sizes to large for his wife and not be in the least bit of trouble with her.

Otherwise, great story. Hope to see more. Perhaps Miss H will start making Kat more dominant over her husband.

Nicola gets a stick of dynamite up her hola!

No fuckin' job is worth that kind of humiliation! And why did the wussy husband give in to the pot-bellied cunt?

Thank you, Nomean_feet, this was outstanding! HOT! Excellent descriptions, with all the events really well motivated. You're a great writer. Now if only my wife had a boss like that :p

Nikola is a dream cum true! I'd love to see more of her abuse of the hubby. Maybe she could teach his wife about forced milkings and turn her into a switch.

As for Goodhue's review... Fuck off Goodhue. What a fucking prick.

Stop trying to insert your fantasys into all the femdom stories it's really hard to find hot femdom stories without all the damn cucks, I'm a big dick sub that gets off by being used just like this dude was. Thanks nomean_feet, while it would of being hotter if the boss was a smoking hot bitch that broke his will.

I really loved this. I was smiling all the way through about how you reversed gender on all the Loving Wives type stories in which a dominant bull has his way with somebody's wife.

In all my favorite stories, a submissive husband submits to a dominant man in front of his wife. Here you have the roles flipped 180 degrees.

Good imagination!

Don

PS. You might enjoy one of my stories.

My stories:https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions

LOVED IT, Loved it, loved it. It screams for a second chapter at least. I appreciate how you built the 'fantasy' to almost believability. The only thing this needs is two to three more sex scenes. More, if you choose to add Kat's coworkers to the mix, perhaps a man, too, so there will be bi-gay sex. Love it.

This is one of the hottest stories I've read, both well written and very imaginative and it turns me on hugely (and I've now read it about 4 times!!). I would love to read more and I know there are a lot more opportunities for Nicola to dominate and humiliate Kat and Dan. Brilliant story, Nomean_feet.

Great story. I read the first chapter and couldn't stop. This is hands down the best story I have ever read. I can see this as a short film.

Keep up the great work.

i cant get enough of this fantastic story .great writing wonderful story

Given the fact that everyone as an I-phone Nicola actions get recorded, she goes to jail and the Company pays out a ton of money to avoid any negative publicity. This was so bad I'm still laughing. Push comes to shove and he simply stands up and beats the crap out of her. What's she going to do? Cry? Badly thought out drivel, even for fiction. BARF!

Love it how her boss breaks both of them into submission. So hot how she seduces first him and then her. You did a great job in creating that dominant persona of her way, in the way how she speaks and acts. You should write another simliar story, maybe head mistress of a high school for girls only, and his wife is a mousy teacher there, who gets dominated by the mature woman, the principal, she has strong thighs, a voluptuous body, big boobs, wears always nylons and grey hair. She forces his wife into dressing sluttish or ridiculous tight outfits and has to teach like this. She changes her into a stupid bimbo with big loopy earrings, chewing bubble gum, looking more like a teen than a teacher. Soon the teenage girls bully her around too and have fun with her, while the principal fucks the brains out of her husband. Maybe you want to explore that. Great writing again, thx

Fabulous story. The scenes in the office are incredible.

Imaginative and well-written, dripping with eroticism. Love how the wife submits to the bossy woman, even licking her husband's precum from her toes! So spectacular -- the husband beneath the boss's desk while she demeans his wife is some of the best writing I've seen. Inspirational !

My wife would have been on her fat bosses face telling her to eat her ass out good. I know because her boss is a bisexual and we both have been together with her.

This story as hot as fuck. I love the toe sucking foot fetish elements. I love Mistress Nicola taking control of the submissive beta couple and humiliating them in front of each other. I really hope for more just like this. Thank you for writing it, it is so hot

This is the only story on the entire site that I keep rereading and still spend the whole time aroused beyond belief. I love how the power of curves is used to contrast the generic concept of beauty. I keep hoping for a sequel!

really dark...mis-labeled-seems to me totally non-consent/mixed w/bd/sm...

did read it thru, if only to see if they'd stand up for themselves finally...not

lot of genres here-this one I'd never choose knowingly

gonna have to backtrack to find where I picked this up from...hopefully not repeat my mistake...

Would love to see some more chapters of this story - exceptionally well written

I fucking love this story.

One of the highlights on this site. Please continue writing such fabulous smut.

Lived this story. So nasty and erotic at the same time.

To be honest, I'd luv for something like this to become reality for me!

amazing story, so hot, I couldn't stop reading it. This is art!

A story written for the really mentally handicapped, right? Even hardcore fans should only find this nonsense laughing. Where I ask does the author live? A fantasy must at least be believable enough that it could happen in reality, otherwise it is pure SiFi. Or does some idiot really think a normal person would go along with this shit?

The whore would be in jail sooner than she would like and suing her and the company would make the two protagonists wealthy! 1*!!!

Wow, so good. I love it.

Man, reading these comments is so cringe. How can so many people come to a fetish site and be surprised and shocked (GASP!) when an erotica has domination, non-consent, foot fetish, etc? Like, did you accidentally come here from marthastewartliving.com, you vanilla motherfuckers? And saying it's not realistic and the guy would sue her? IT'S EROTICA! It's supposed to tantalize the possibility of what COULD happen, not what is likely to happen.

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Well, the couple wanted the wife to keep her job. Giving the botton half of lingerie to the boss opened the door for her to dominate them. Now the boss has an open invitation to use both for fantastic sex. He should be pegging while the wife watches.

What a great story. Loved the way "Miss" took control of both of them to use for her sexual pleasure. Very hot. Keep writing. You have a talent.

Absolutely brilliant story! Loved the dynamic between the three characters and the 'under the desk' and 'drugging' scenes in particular were incredibly hot

Dominant black women are such a turn-on. I have been lucky enough to meet a few over the years and am always on the lookout to chat and meet new ones (especially local, but happy to chat to ones from around the world being told what I must do to serve them).

Really enjoyed the gradual domination. The build-up was very well paced and written. Gonna read more. <3