All Comments on 'She's the Boss: An Office Romance'

by SonofGondor

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charlie48charlie48about 9 years ago
Fond memories

Wow a confident older women, great story. I hope you write a sequel

SonofGondorSonofGondorabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Might well right a sequel - 'Aubrey' has certainly given me lots of inspiration!

retmstrretmstrabout 9 years ago
****

The cougar attacks! Enjoyed the tale - so did Leonard. Good writing and reading. Cheers!

SonofGondorSonofGondorabout 9 years agoAuthor
Confused

@retmstr - don't understand what you mean about 'Leonard' enjoying the story as well...

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 9 years ago
Great story BUT

Great story BUT you have to write a sequel and give this story a proper ending. Please don't be like other writers who don't finish what they started. Show us what you've got. 5 stars so far...........

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great love story

This chapter is well-written, and well-paced. The characters are introduced carefully, and there is a proper build-up in the story, unlike so many submissions that rush through from beginning to end. The erotic element is used very well here, proving that it can be used in the Romance genre, if handled properly, which this author does very well.

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