by Thalaxian
Good story, but Maddie has to be one of the worst human beings I've ever read.
Excellent! Keep going ahead with it! Loving your dialogues! This needs more parts! ;)
Try to develop Maddie's arc, where she tries to more actively dominate him.
That would be even more hotter!
Then he would become total biatch! :)
im a bit conflicted
its a really hot storyb but the rape, the coersion. the threats. Irinas cruelty,
the office gossip, his taking the promotion. its all so wrong, that it diminishes the story. Kudos I guess for not making him fall in love.
@Anon Alas, it's not meant to be sunshine and roses. The kink may not be for you, and that's cool! I'll be writing things that are far less unpleasant at some point or other anyhow. There's absolutely a sliding scale of reluctance, and this uses a hammer where other things may use mere gentle words! Peace and love, xoxox
I would love to see a 3some. Irina fucks Maddie, pussy or ass don't matter. Then Theo licks her clean while Irina fucks his ass as hard as she can, All the time calling him names and maybe spanking his ass with a leather slapper.
Outstanding! I am completely in lust with your work. Please continue doing what you do so well!
Its a hot story, but the rape and the subsequent lack of real support makesit too big of a turn off to me.
not much of a rape... if he didn't really try to stop her and he liked it. I would love to have been/be him
Another excellent tale well told.
Thank you so verrrry much for letting Theo accept and fully enjoy his attraction. He's probably got a way to go before he 'owns it' as Maddie said, but he's well along that path.
Oooh. There's another chapter? Well, that's enough comment for now.
Thanks!
@awyldside you are a fucking idiot. "if he didn't really try to stop her and he liked it" are you kidding me? Did you know that many rape survivors orgasm? That doesn't make it not rape you absolute fucking troglodyte.
Maddie is disgusting, saying both that he's lying (even though she's literally the one who warned him that Irina will probably rape him) and that he can't really be raped because he's a man. Jesus, I get that you like to start all your stories off with rape, but with the other ones at least it got better pretty much immediately. In this one you followed up a rape with another rape, zero tenderness, and then someone degraded and humiliating him for being raped? Actually felt nauseous reading this one. Should have rape or non consent somewhere in the tags