All Comments on 'Shift In The Right Direction Ch. 01'

I love the story already. It is different so far from others that I have read and can't wait to read the rest of the story. Great work.

Well written, I look forward to more.

It is a nice read flows well hope chapter 2 comes soon.

Really interesting. Definitely a different tale. I admit I'm curious to see where you take this, so hopefully you'll post a Chapter Two??

I'm loving this story already, more soon please!!!

Really love it! i hope chap 2 will be online soon :)

like your writing style :D

hugs

very nicely done. i look forward to more.

I love where this is going, it's a great idea! Can't wait to read the next part!!

I like the way you took the time to develop this story.

Great work.

*****

please, add another chapter and make it become reality.

Very good writing!

Is there going to be an ending to this???Or is this just another unfinshed story.I get so dissapointed when a good story goes nowhere,its a bummer for your readers who get into your writings,such a shame you havent written in about a year.

Did you know 99.9% of all calico cats are female. The color pattern depends upon having two X chromosomes but with only one of them active in each body cell. Early in development a given cell opts to inactivate one of them and all the cell’s descendants adhere to that option. This results in a mosaic of skin patches each growing the fur color determined by its active X chromosome.

The inactive X chromosome is visible in a light microscope and is called a Barr Body after the man who first described it. Long before DNA analysis the presence of a Barr Body in mammalian cells could distinguish a female and was used to qualify an athlete to complete as a female. It was a woman, Mary Lyon, who later determined what that mysterious Barr Body really was.