All Comments on 'Shifting Fortunes Ch. 05'

I think the pace of their story is wonderful. I adore Jake and his patience! Witnessing Sam's adjustment to freedom and making her own choices is a real treat! I love how these two are working together while trying to work through their individual demons.

Looking forward to more ~

The way you are playing out the relationship between Sam and Jake is so tender and loving. After what Rutherford did to Sam, Jake is taking the only path Sam will respond to. Good for Jake and his ability to read the situation.

I eagerly await the next chapter so tell that new puppy of your so shape up or ship out! I hope the two of you are having fun together.

to what the others said - great story

I enjoy the slow and detailed pace you are moving at.

Thank you for all your comments so far and for the lovely email I received. You guys are making this worthwhile. It is a lot of fun (but nerve wracking) submitting a story and waiting to see the results :o) Thanks for appreciating the slower pace Im taking with their story xx

At the very beginning Sam mentioned the great Reveal. I been wondering what exactly that was. How can the world be aware of them and yet allow them to be persecuted and victimized the way that they have been. Maybe these two don't know that help may be available to them.